Thursday, March 11, 2010

Chapter 4 Page 121

When they get to the graveyard I could see where they were at night, and surrounded by tombstones. (This is a visualization piece.) Then when they started digging up dirt and hitting the chest with the shovel. I could picture like how they do it in movies. "Clunk" Anyways they went on to pull it out of the ground, and bury the hole back up. While Jack was leaning back against the tomb stone. While Fitch opened the box. BOOM, a flash of lights and he flew back. Of course Jack and his intelligence realize now that he was suppose to be the one to open the box. Fitch was just sacred and not harmed, and just blown far away. (Hehe.) Jack grabs the box and slowly opens it while muttering the charm Linda told him to say. I will continue this post. It is not finished! Because you always wanna end with a bang and it gets juicy later...

1 comment:

  1. I find your book interesting and your side comments odd. Maybe will Andrew will let me borrow it sometime.

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